Date Jan/24, 2013
Dear Sarwat,
I want you my best friend to come to the US. I miss you a
lot. I fancy you will come to the US because of several reasons. The first
reason is education, second is freedom, and the third is that in the US you
will have many opportunities to get a good job. You should also come to the US
for me. I know you love your family and you don’t want to leave them but you
should think about your future, not only about your present. I am sure if you
come here you will be happy.
The first reason to come is for education. You should come to
the US because here you can get good education. This is very important for you
and for your bright future. In the US you can get a quality education. You know,
in our area, the situation is not really good for education. The terrorists
destroyed our schools, so how will the girls get education there? Now, the
situation is a little bit better, but not really safe. I suggest you come to
the US and get a good education.
The second reason is freedom. You can get freedom here for
anything. You can converse about what you want to speak about to anyone. In
Swat women have no rights to say anything and they cannot do anything that they
want to do. So, you can get that freedom you want in your life. I want you to
have freedom here and make your life superior and striking.
The third reason is that you can get any kind of job easy or
hard. Some jobs you find have very good salaries. You are interested in any
field like nursing, engineering, or other kinds of jobs. You can do it here. If
you get a degree from high school then you can go to College and get an
education in whichever field. You are interested in. Then, you can get good a salary
for those kinds of jobs. That is very important that you feel happy and
satisfied in that job. You can do your work with interest and a lot of effort.
For those three reasons what I desire is for you to come here
and make your future brilliant and secure. You will live your life with every
facility. You will also make your family life easier and more beautiful. If you
are pleased your family will also be glad and your friends will feel very
joyful. So, I request you to come to the US and reach your goals.
Friend, you’re sincerely
Afshah Afshah
Excellent persuasive letter, Afshah! You made very good points and write it in a strong and structurally sound way. I enjoyed reading this and am happy that you find living here such a positive experience. Thank you so much for sharing!
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